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A Vulnerable Heart - Part 1

A self written tale of another blogger, Shivani aka Minnie. Do read the tale and comment on the blog.
First self written tale of our co-blogger Shivani aka Minnie. Well I can assure our readers that you will enjoy reading it definitely as she is good at writing though she does not believe it herself. :P Don't forget to make some inspiring comments about the story. :D
Part 1
It was a lovely morning Vaidahi just woke up with a lovely smile on her face, she looked at her cellphone for a second and rushed to get ready to meet love of her life for the first time in real. Yeah! He’s online friend of her they met on social networking site and fall in love within few months of chit-chats and phone calls. It was her first experience of love, yeah it was naïve as morning dew. Although, it was a long distance relationship, they never felt the distance between them. Kaishav too was excited to meet her, he somehow arranged a trip to see her,and it was almost a one and half day journey for him. He was nervous too and repeatedly make calls to make sure that Vaidahi will came on time or maybe he has some doubts about their meet; whatever. :)
Vaidahi checked the time again and rushed to the college. She’s so excited, she skipped her breakfast and make sure her handmade card was in bag. She looked normal though graceful, charm and spark in her eyes reveals everything, as she reached the college everyone starts praising her freshlook though she didn’t put onmakeup except a thin line of kohl in her eyes, that Kaishav used to like in her pictures the most. Its 9’O clock, train is scheduled to reach at 10 but she is getting nervous and thrilled, she decided to leave the class early to receive him from the station as he was new to her city. She reached before the scheduled arrival. Aura around her was different there is a essence of love in the air though the platform was swarming she somehow managed to get a stall for her to give a final touch to her card, as she’s not satisfied with the feelings that she wrote for him last night. She’s on her writing mode, as her pen starts cribbing the thoughts on her mind an announcement about the delay in arrival came, which makes the wait even more aching& miserable for her. Train was half an hour late but she kept herself full in framing the conversation she wants to have with Kaishav. ;)
Shortly, the wait is over her phone ranged and the train was on platform, she’s eagerly looking for the coach that Kaishav told her about a minute ago on phone, she’s still having a conversation with him, “Where are you Kaishav?” she kept on repeating and he just laughed and said “I saw you”.  She’s getting more conscious and nervous and finally she noticed him, He’s tall, handsome and his eyes were smiling at her. Flood of thoughts starts gushing in her mind within a second, “how I looked”, “does he like me”, “he is so good looking, why he likes me?” Oh god! Within a second her thoughts covers a light year..
- Minnie

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  1. Awesome Minnie

    Waiting fe

    1. Awesome Minnie or Minnie Awesome? :3
      Don't you think both minnie and her stories are awesome? :)

    2. Thanks ! Shikha :*

  2. Both awesomeeeeee

    Waiting fr second part

  3. It takes a lot of efforts to pen down your thoughts. My respect to you. Keep it up.

  4. Thnx ^_^ I'll try to improve :)


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